Passion

Octave Rima

The lullaby of the ocean

calmly soothes the cradled night

while shadows linger with emotion

and passion continues to ignite

as moonlight becomes a potion

the dancing body of the waves excite

the salty fragrance in the air

seduces lovers unaware

©SyberRose

Author's Note

critiques welcome

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

i love how this affects me ..i treated myself when i was going to assignment in San Diego as a travel nurse .. i stared a couple days in an expensive (for me) hotel on Pismo Beach ..i had a 900sq foot room over looking the ocean from the second floor .. my little patio gave me an incredible perch to watch, feel and listen to the lapping shoreline and seagulls rode currents and hovered not 10 feet in front of me .. curious i suppose ..your poem brought me right back there ..i can feel the salt spray in the air ..thank you for your haiku like poem ..it is haiku like to me anyway ;)
E.

[Shaun Payton]

Beauty is everywhere. Elegance becomes your poetry so vivid I can picture its peaceful nature.

[SyberRose]

Thank you again and so nice to see you back with us...Rose:)

[Shaun Payton]

I am on a reading roll Rose :) Thanks, nice to be back!:)

[redflutterby]

Fantastic flowing lines....you're the queen of romantic poetry!! ;-)

[SyberRose]

thanks you...it looks like the image isn't showing anymore though...ill have to find another one:)

[s y e]

I loved this! The picture is stunning, it's capture such beauty that this world has, the colours and all. The poem was well worded and really done the picture justice, well done, Rose!

~ Noodle.

[SyberRose]

Thank you yes i loved the picture ...it did compliment the poem.:)

[Soma-ko]

An enchanting and tranquil write, great job, and much enjoyed. :)

[SyberRose]

Thank you again...and for peeking in:)

[Ency Bearis]

Lovely nature poem and melancholic picture with it, good one.

[SyberRose]

Glad you enjoyed it and thank you very much for taking time to read today Ency...Rose

[Ency Bearis]

You're welcome.

[SyberRose]

I should have told you it was a package deal again haa

[Ency Bearis]

Must be ha,ha,ha.

[QuietlyCrash]

This is just lovely. It has a beautiful flow to it and I can just feel the lull of the ocean. Great job, Rose :)

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much QC...and so glad you enjoyed...Rose:)

[Zahra]

Beautiful Rose, really soothing and soft. Well written.

[SyberRose]

Thank you very much...Rose:)

[Vikrantsingh]

Wow - The lullaby of the ocean, calmly soothes the cradled night. These lines are too catch *lovestruck*

Simply loved it :)

- Singh :)
100/100...

[SyberRose]

Thank you Singh...appreciate your visit today....Rose:)

[Vikrantsingh]

You're welcome :)

[B-poet]

A very special write that packs a powerful punch of epic porprotions. Great work. I'm adding this to my library. :)

[SyberRose]

Thank you Bpoet and I appreciate that...thanks for visiting...Rose