Emerald (double acrostic)

Double Acrostic

E vening shadows, ebony blu E
M oon flowers in full bloo M
E ntwining with vines of lov E
R ed lips, champagne and cavia R
A nd naked branches dance the samb A
L overs behind a bougainvillea wal L
D ancing to whispers of the win D

©SyberRose

Author's Note

My first one... I welcome critiques

Reviews

[ANTO]

You have outdone yourself with this fabulous creation Rose. Emerald ...hmmm (HUGS) - my favourite colour. Your mind must be a wonderful place to live.
X

[SyberRose]

my birthstone too...thank you so much for checking out my poetry Anthony...x

[ShelleyA]

A very good write and skillfully crafted Double Acrostic. Perfect form. Delightful imagery. Good flow as is the line to line transition and breaks. Nice rhythm. Lovely depth of feeling; romantic. Good word choice as is the alliteration and assonance. Well penned and a good read. Write on!

[SyberRose]

Thank you Shelly for that very nice review...Rose:)

[ShelleyA]

You're very welcome and my pleasure Rose. Have a good day.

[Sami Khalil]

One of your most creative poems . Well done and good...:)

[SyberRose]

Thank you again...I do one a year haa...thats enough

[Sami Khalil]

I understand . You are welcome ...:)

[SyberRose]

actually im just kidding...this is may first and probably my last ha

[Sami Khalil]

I hope you do more . You are welcome ...:)

[redflutterby]

Bravo Rose....now I'm itching to try one as well. ;-)

[SyberRose]

You will do great at it...thanks Red:)

[Stella Armour]

well done Rose...:o)..........

[SyberRose]

Thank you Stella dear...hugss

[Einstein Noodle]

that's enchanting; and very clever! have also not tasted such a double as this.
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[SyberRose]

Thank you for peeking in today...you will have to try one some time...Rose:)

[Soma-ko]

Huh, would never had thought of a double acrostic. The poem is great, and much enjoyed. :)

[SyberRose]

Thank you Soma...its my birthstone ha and hope you have a wonderful day...:)

[Soma-ko]

Thank you, I'm off to a little adventure with my family. Not sure if the place has wifi or not though... Will be back in a few days, and doing last minute packing.

[Jack...]

Wow, I have never seen this before, very cool indeed. It just goes to show, there is something new we can learn everyday. Loved this Rose.

[SyberRose]

Thank you Jack...I do maybe one a year...glad you enjoyed it:)

[Cassie]

Great creativity this is...good job

[SyberRose]

Thank you Cassie and for taking time to read my poems...hugs

[Cassie]

You are welcome dear, hugs too

[Zahra]

Wow best acrostic I've read on this site so far, really nice, clever.

[SyberRose]

Wow...thank you very much...Rose:)