Emerald (double acrostic)

Double Acrostic

E vening shadows, ebony blu E
M oon flowers in full bloo M
E ntwining with vines of lov E
R ed lips, champagne and cavia R
A nd naked branches dance the samb A
L overs behind a bougainvillea wal L
D ancing to whispers of the win D

©SyberRose

Author's Note

My first one... I welcome critiques

Reviews

[Shaun Payton]

That was so cool:) A double emerald view.:)

[SyberRose]

thank you so much Shaun...I haven't wrote one since ha..glad you liked...Rose:)

[Shaun Payton]

I havent read you in a while lol You are welcome Rose:)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

figures, you would try one and it would be a "double acrostic"

fantastic job on this one...because somehow you did this and didn't feel the least bit forced..very very clever...

[SyberRose]

the only other one i ever did was Merry Christmas...a double ...thanks Jacob for reading.

[s y e]

I adore this, I think it is amazing that you manage you to do this. I can't remember if it was Stella that I read one similar to this only with a different word just the other day, or was it you? Not sure, haha.

Awesome, I love the way it reads, and the wording. Great job.

~ Noodle.

[SyberRose]

Yes Stella wrote HEARTS....Thank you very much Sye and you have a nice night.

[s y e]

Oh yeah! That one, you are both awesome!

[Ency Bearis]

Witty Acrostic poem and well composed one - beginning and at the end. Thumbs up.

[SyberRose]

Thanks...I appreciate that...:)

[SteveB]

BRAVA!
Never a forced word or phrase, beautiful imagery and a written with a soft and gentle touch.

[SyberRose]

Thank you Steve....nice to hear from you...and hope you are doing well...Rose:)

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Fabulous - pure Fabulous!

[SyberRose]

Thank you very much ...I know you would like that color for some reason haa...its my birthstone.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Ah, very nice! Mine is the pink diamond - surprising I know! x

[SyberRose]

what month is that..

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

October . . . . .

[SyberRose]

oh okay...my brothers was the fourth of Oct...his was an opal.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

well I was joking! x lol x

[SyberRose]

oh okay haa...hugs

[Rita L. Sev]

Wow! Great word choices for this - you've got skills! Great double acrostic! I want to try one... :)

[SyberRose]

Good...you should Rita..it was fun....thank you...:)

[Frieda P]

Lovely, I'm wondering why you used red as your font instead of emerald green? Tough to do a double acrostic but you nailed it Rose.

[SyberRose]

To tell you the truth...i was wondering that too in bed last night after I posted it haa...

[Frieda P]

Haa, I know it probably took a lot of patience too to set that up, still a great acrostic!

[SyberRose]

I might change it ha

[Frieda P]

And I have to stop typing too to fast ;-)

[Frieda P]

Wow, you're quick!

[SyberRose]

I guess i thought it would show up better red...I changed it.

[Frieda P]

It stands out fine with the green, never tired a double acrostic before, wouldn't know where to start.....

[SyberRose]

I did a merry christmas once haa

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

Simply amazing. Your skill is without limits.

[SyberRose]

I don't do these often ...my one and only ha thanks Travis:)

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

All the more impressive, Rose.

[Just Kim]

Very poetic and so well set up,
Love the form, amazing write : )

[SyberRose]

Thank you again...Rose