Invisible

It is true what lies beneath the surface
but the surface is not transparent
and the wish of the unattainable
is invisible to the one who cares.

Beneath the mask of perfection
is the demureness of a smile;
behind intuitive eyes of a woman
is a sixth sense of the blind.

When one is walking in shadows
it is easier to fulfill their needs;
walking quietly unnoticed
in the privacy of their heart.
Being on the outside looking in
into neglectfulness of love.

©SyberRose

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

oh my! such a desperation of wanting and neglect ... horrible ... worse than a knife to the chest ... and who can cut with a knife the barriers we keep ... what an insightful brutal piece says i... whew ..
E.

[s y e]

Rose, this is lovely. This really tugged on my heart hon, such a lovely, emotional write.

~ Noodle.

[SyberRose]

Thank you Sye...glad you enjoyed this piece and hope you had a great birthday...hugss

[s y e]

Thanks Rose - I had a great time. (:

[Betty]

"Being on the outside looking in, into neglectfulness of love." A breathtaking poem. And i could very much relate to it. I loved this one.

[SyberRose]

Thank you for reading and commenting Betty...I appreciate your visit...Rose:)

[Betty]

You are more than welcome :)

[Jack...]

This was beautiful, our minds, though invisible to others speak very clearly to us. Intuition, strange feelings, internal warnings and everyday is a holiday fireworks. If only some knew exactly how we feel. Very nice Rose.

[SyberRose]

Thanks Jack...this speaks to a lot of readers...glad you enjoyed it...Rose:)

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

We all want to be that way from time to time my love, you gave light to that feeling very well, good read.

[SyberRose]

Thank you Thomas...yes i'm sure...i'm happy you liked it...Rose:)

[Rita L. Sev]

This on tugged at my heart in a different way; very profound and beautiful, Rose!

[SyberRose]

Thank you Rita...and hope you are enjoying your day...Rose

[Sami Khalil]

I had the sixth sense that this poem is going to be great. All lovely and Rose - like...Bravo...:)

[SyberRose]

Thank you Sami...and for peeking in today...hope you have great day...:)

[Sami Khalil]

You too. Always welcome ...:)

[Frieda P]

Bittersweet one Rose, not your usual light & airy romantic, I enjoyed the intensity of this read.

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Frieda...I hope you enjoy your day...Rose:)

[Zahra]

Thought provoking. I really liked this piece, beautifully crafted.

[SyberRose]

Thank you I'm glad you liked this piece...Rose:)

[Cassie]

I have enjoyed reading and thank you for the read request. Good one

[SyberRose]

and thank you for reading Cassie...I appreciate it...Rose