Moment In Time~

Moment In Time~

A Poem by SyberRose
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Painting by Luana Silense/Deviant art

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It was a precious moment to cherish

A moment when love did exist

But fate of love was meant to perish

As weaknesses’ could not resist~

 

It was a time of foolish dreams

And portrait of emptiness

The uncharacteristic schemes

A feeling of amorousness~

 

T'was a wish above all wishes

It was torturous to the heart

A bouquet not meant to flourish

It was as precious as fine art~

 

T'was a mysterious moment in time

But enchanting bells were not meant to chime.



©SyberRose


 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

© 2013 SyberRose


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SyberRose
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A darling and quite starkly beautiful piece that captures the reader, well done, good read.

Posted 11 Years Ago


SyberRose

11 Years Ago

Thank you Thomas...and for peeking in:)
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Lee
Beautiful.
There's a simplicity to it that I like, like with the rhyme scheme. It adds to the magnitude; it just generates sounds on another level if that makes sense. It's very lyrical too and I feel these words could carry much depth in song. Wonderful write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


SyberRose

11 Years Ago

thank you Lee...and I'm happy you enjoyed it...Rose:)
Lee

11 Years Ago

:) Nice job. Was happy to read.
I simply beautiful sonnet here my friend. Reaching into our hearts and bringing our emotions front and center. Very nice.

Posted 11 Years Ago


SyberRose

11 Years Ago

Thank you again Jack...I do appreciate your nice comments.:)


"T'was a wish above all wishes

It was torturous to the heart

A bouquet not meant to flourish

It was as precious as fine art~



T'was a mysterious moment in time"
I feel the sadness and the tortured heart in this wonderful poem with the aching for lost moments that were meant to be...Bravo...:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

^^~^^ :)............
SyberRose

11 Years Ago

Nice Photo Sami:)
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

Thank you kindly...:)

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Added on July 1, 2013
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