Moment In Time~

Moment In Time~

A Poem by SyberRose
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Painting by Luana Silense/Deviant art

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It was a precious moment to cherish

A moment when love did exist

But fate of love was meant to perish

As weaknesses’ could not resist~

 

It was a time of foolish dreams

And portrait of emptiness

The uncharacteristic schemes

A feeling of amorousness~

 

T'was a wish above all wishes

It was torturous to the heart

A bouquet not meant to flourish

It was as precious as fine art~

 

T'was a mysterious moment in time

But enchanting bells were not meant to chime.



©SyberRose


 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

© 2013 SyberRose


Author's Note

SyberRose
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A lovely capturing of a moment. PErhaps the lost moments are the most cherished. A question however, the second line of the second stanza. Is there a typo with the first word?

Posted 11 Years Ago


SyberRose

11 Years Ago

Should I change that to AND Portrait??..thank you Steve...Rose:)
SteveB

11 Years Ago

And or as?
Always enjoy your poetry, another really beautifully penned poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago


SyberRose

11 Years Ago

I'm so glad you enjoyed this piece too...:)
Ive lived this moment, but find it a blessing to have experienced it. Well done Rose.

Posted 11 Years Ago


SyberRose

11 Years Ago

Well thats good...a nice way of looking at it...thank you for your comments as always:) and I do app.. read more
Shaun Payton

11 Years Ago

Oh my pleasure. You keep writing good poetry and i'll make time to read!:)
I also had a moment like this. This is nice.

Posted 11 Years Ago


SyberRose

11 Years Ago

It comes in handy when writing poetry ha...thanks Cassie...:)
Superb.... this reached a personal space I try to forget.

Posted 11 Years Ago


SyberRose

11 Years Ago

Thank you Travis...nice to hear from you tonight...Rose:)
thank goodness i got here before the waves of nausea hit...this is stunning writing, Rose. i don't know where you muse was hiding earlier this month, but you have launched an all out assault to the senses in recent weeks and it has all been very, very good! excellent write.....

Posted 11 Years Ago


SyberRose

11 Years Ago

thanks for peeking in today...and for the compliments quin...Rose:)
quinfinn

11 Years Ago

always welcome, dear Rose
Bouquets not meant to flower - bells not meant to chime - sad and unnatural, like love lost.
Love your work Rose - and I get to hear every one ;)
X

Posted 11 Years Ago


SyberRose

11 Years Ago

At least one of us writes happy stuff haa...not too many laughs reading mine...hugss
ANTO

11 Years Ago

I get just as much enjoyment out of listening to a requiem as a pop tune Rose. Its all good.
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I like the form of this, Rose. A moment in time, but not the right moment... in matters of love, timing is everything. Beautiful poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago


SyberRose

11 Years Ago

Thank you Rita...nice to see you peeking in tonight...Have a good one:)
Moment in time … yes, had been there myself! Great poetical encapsulation of love’s lost opportunity. Love the flow and creative word play. Reminded me of a quotation from T.S. Elliot;

“Footfalls echo in the memory, down the passage we did not take, towards the door we never opened, into the rose garden.”

Bless!

Posted 11 Years Ago


SyberRose

11 Years Ago

Thank you Phill Oz O'fee...and for that quote of Elliot..I liked it...thanks for peeking in...Rose

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