Lavender Mist

She savored the sweet bouquet of his lips

The  taste of elderberry wine~

He tempted with grapes of passion,
                                Overflowing the brim of desire~

 

The delicacy of love ~ she sampled
               Within the burning wick of candlelight~

Love faded with crimson clover sunsets,

But aglow within the gold flaxen moon~

 

Memories swirl in the twilight hour

Within sheerness of the lavender mist~

Gossamer breeze of enchantment,

Lingers in the bewitchment of the wind~

She bids the bare essence of him adieu,

Sachet memories and eyes ~ sapphire blue~

 

©SyberRose

 

 

 

Author's Note

thank you for reading.

Reviews

[Daydreamer]

What a wonderfully written and transcendently inspiring piece!
you swept me off my feet as I taste these words of yours xx
worth a 100/100 rating,honestly

[Diane Lockard]

Gossamer breeze of enchantment, lavender mist, all lovely thoughts swirling in my head... Wonderful! Diane

[SyberRose]

Thank you very much Diane...I'm happy you enjoyed this piece...Rose :)

[Zahra]

Amazing imagery, really beautifully done

[SyberRose]

Thanks so much for taking time to peek in...Rose:)

[Shaun Payton]

Oh Rose, always a pleasure to come by and read. Such a centerpiece of memories. :)

[SyberRose]

Hi Shaun...thank you for peeking in ...Its always nice hearing from you...:)

[Shaun Payton]

Hi Rose! :) You most welcomey!:)

[Matt]

Very beautiful and eloquent. It feels like a single moment you have some how stretched then divided before bottling the essence of each feeling.
Nice work.

[SyberRose]

Thank you Matt...I appreciate your nice compliments and thank you for peeking in...Rose:)

[Traci]

Such a lovely write, full of beautiful words and imagery. I not only read the words, but felt them...full of passion and love.

"Memories swirl in the twilight hour
Within sheerness of the lavender mist"

Beautiful lines! My new fav of yours.

[Cherrie]

loved the title!!!!!!
I am so glad I found this poem- amazing images

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much...and im glad you enjoyed it:)

[asdarkeyesclose]

'Gossamer breeze of enchantment,
Lingers in the bewitchment of the wind~'

a great last couplet, it appealed to me a lot. some breathtaking images, almost sensual, always refined. fantastic.

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much...and thank you for peeking in...Rose:)

[s y e]

You have such an eye for pictures, Rose! I love all the pictures you have. This is such a beautiful write with amazing imagery and lovely wording.

~ Noodle.

[SyberRose]

Thank you Sye...it is fun looking of paintings and photos to match the poems...nice to see you again:)

[Einstein Noodle]

delicately said ...with undertones of powerful passion... trippy pic.... we have an elderberry bush that has finally blossomed (after 3 yrs) ...and it is incredibly delicate and colorful ... i'm not sure about the last line of the second verse starting with "But" ... i stumble on it a bit .... love the ending ... its perfect ... E.

[SyberRose]

Thank you for taking time to read...I just noticed i had but in the last two lines so I removed it from the third line because it was one too many syllables...maybe it will read better now to you...:)

[Einstein Noodle]

yes ...makes more sense to me... i am so humbled... love to you .. and peace and joy .. E.