Your Lips

 

 

Your lips upon mine, kissing softly

I open my eyes ~ but you are not there

Only at night ~ when I am fast asleep

I feel you again touching my hair

 

Are you a ghost or just a dream?

Closing my eyes ~ I feel your stare

Drifting to sleep ~ is it all in my mind?

Alone in my bed, touch if you dare

 

Tossing and turning, thinking of you

My eyes are closed ~ and unaware

I fall asleep ~ your breath on my cheek

Reaching out for you, it is just thin air

 

Again tonight ~ I think of you

Again tonight ~ My lips I share.

 

©SyberRose

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading.

Reviews

[redflutterby]

Echoes of loss and longing!! Truly beautiful Rose!

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Red...sweet dreams to ya...:)

[Cassie]

I hope this dream came to reality. good one Rose

[SyberRose]

Thank you Cassie dear...I wrote that a long time ago.:)

[Shaun Payton]

Dreams are mysterious, sometimes prophetic. Enjoyed Rose.

[SyberRose]

Yes sometimes they play tricks on you...you wake up and smell the roses haa...:)

[Shaun Payton]

Lol yeah or check the closets lol

[s y e]

"Tossing and turning, thinking of you
My eyes are closed ~ and unaware
I fall asleep ~ your breath on my cheek
Reaching out for you, it is just thin air" ~~ Awwwah, this is just beautiful. Lovely wording, its so sweet!

~ Noodle.

[SyberRose]

Thank you Sye...nice to hear from you tonight dear...hugs

[Ency Bearis]

Remarkable introspection in an event of slumber. Thanks for sharing.

[SyberRose]

You are welcome Ency...and thank you again:)

[Soma-ko]

An illusion, a trick of one's mind, or simply something supernatural? All is possible, in a way, but none really matter, since she cannot seek what is not there. Much enjoyed.

[SyberRose]

Dreams are mysterious...very strange indeed...I'm happy you liked it Soma...:)

[Einstein Noodle]

dreamy sad is the way i feel... and soft lips mmmmmmmmmmmmm... :) E.

[SyberRose]

Thanks E. and for peeking in...I appreciate your visit...Rose:)

[NA]

Hauntingly beautiful, ghost or dream either sounds wonderful....enjoyed :)

[SyberRose]

Thank you again Raven...Im glad you liked it...Rose

[Zahra]

soft and beautiful. Wonderfuly penned

[SyberRose]

Thank you for peeking in today...I appreciate your nice comments...Rose:)

[ANTO]

Like Vikrantsingh, I too love lips Rose. The plumper the better but not the distored filled lips of our age, Im talking Sophia Loren lips. Pheww where was I ..?
Oh I imagined an errant incubus visiting the subject of this piece or a lost-at-sea sailor who doesn't realise he has passed over and continues to visit his lover.
An exotic work Rose - with lots of atmosphere - loved it
X

[SyberRose]

Thank you Anthony...I'm happy you liked this piece...always nice hearing from you:)