Operatic Breeze

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    Eerie voices in the night ~ sing in harmony
    soft fluted winds ~ operatic breeze
    
    Haunting is the darkness ~ as they play in tune
    woodwinds in the shadows ~ flutes, oboes, and bassoons
    
    Soft vibrations warm the air ~ through bell of clarinet
    leaves tango and swirl about ~ moonlight silhouettes
    
    Music in the fog ~ grand opera of ecstasy
    goblins stalking ~ orchestra of eternity
    
    Creeping in the blackness ~ spirits from saxophone
    vampire appears to be Dracula's clone
    
    Conductor in the breeze ~ fangs glistening with blood
    curtain of velvet lowers ~ in Theater of Black Rose Buds

     

    ©SyberRose
    
    

     

Reviews

[quinfinn]

i love your poetry, however there are two types of music i never listen to...opera is one of them...i just wanna shout "speak English!" nicely written......

[SyberRose]

I guess I was thinking of Phantom of the Opera in the back of my mind..haa...thanks Quin

[B-poet]

The fourth stanza is my favortie. A very creatively unique written piece that belongs in a class of its own. A fine write and read as well. Great work my fellow writing partner. :)

[SyberRose]

Well thank you very much its different then my usual ha...thanks for peeking in BPoet:)

[David Scott]

I enjoy the opera. I'm not as educated on this area of music, but I have taken voice lessons in college and had the joy of singing some operetic music.
I could feel the shades and colors here and definitely hear the music.
Well penned.

[SyberRose]

Thank you David...I'm glad you enjoyed it...Rose:)

[NA]

Love this...my kind of read....gothic,vampires...wonderfully dark....awesome write!

[SyberRose]

Thank you Raven...happy you enjoyed it:)

[Quill~]

*Standing ovation*
I loved the theatrical feel of this piece! Vampires and an orchestra, what more could you want?...the drama is all there! I enjoyed reading this wonderful write... great flow and rhyme, Rose. :)

[SyberRose]

Thank you Quill...and I like your standing ovation haa...glad you enjoyed it:)

[Sami Khalil]

"Music in the fog ~ grand opera of ecstasy
goblins stalking ~ orchestra of eternity

Creeping in the blackness ~ spirits from saxophone
vampire appears to be Dracula's clone"
For sure much different from your other writes for this one is dark, eerie and good too...:)
Still peeping in...:)

[SyberRose]

yes I know...Im practicing for Halloween haa...thanks Sami...I love it when you peek in ha..:)

[Sami Khalil]

Hahaha...You are welcome...:)