Operatic Breeze

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    Eerie voices in the night ~ sing in harmony
    soft fluted winds ~ operatic breeze
    
    Haunting is the darkness ~ as they play in tune
    woodwinds in the shadows ~ flutes, oboes, and bassoons
    
    Soft vibrations warm the air ~ through bell of clarinet
    leaves tango and swirl about ~ moonlight silhouettes
    
    Music in the fog ~ grand opera of ecstasy
    goblins stalking ~ orchestra of eternity
    
    Creeping in the blackness ~ spirits from saxophone
    vampire appears to be Dracula's clone
    
    Conductor in the breeze ~ fangs glistening with blood
    curtain of velvet lowers ~ in Theater of Black Rose Buds

     

    ©SyberRose
    
    

     

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

spooky! a howling on steroids :) i think i will stay indoors tonight ;) i especially appreciate the clarinet .. such a sharp but subtle sound ..
E.

[SteveB]

VERY well crafted. I enjoyed the use of near rhyme and your images were sharp and vivid. Excellent use of the orchestra. Brava maestra.

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Steve...i'm happy you enjoyed this piece...Rose:)

[Traci]

From the title, picture, and font choice....to your wording and description this was another amazingly well crafted piece. Dark but enjoyable. "Music in the fog - grand opera of ecstasy, goblins stalking - orchestra of eternity" These lines stood out the most, my favorites. Looking forward to catching up on all your work, as I am quickly becoming a fan of your work.

[SyberRose]

Thank you Traci....I appreciate your visit....Rose:)

[s y e]

Wow! Rose, this is such a powerful write. I loved the wording and description.

"Music in the fog ~ grand opera of ecstasy
goblins stalking ~ orchestra of eternity" ~~ My favourite lines, well done. This was amazing as always.

~ Noodle.

[SyberRose]

thank you dear...happy you enjoyed my dark little piece...Rose:)

[rhythm&blues]

Very beautiful read, I enjoyed this.

[SyberRose]

Thank you very much...I'm happy you enjoyed...Rose:)

[Armand D.]

I liked it a lot. I wish it were a little longer. Fun, imaginative piece.

[SyberRose]

Thank you Armand...I am glad you liked it...I appreciate your comments today...Rose:)

[Jack...]

I'm sensing a pattern to your poetry and that pattern is beauty. This, even being a bit dark, is soft and fluent. Somehow you craft words, simple words, words we use everyday into pure, fresh, and absolutely gorgeous poetry. Very nice my friend.

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Jack...and i'm happy you enjoyed this piece...Rose:)

[Stella Armour]

how i love those beautiful smooth tones of a clarinet... this must be the "phantom of the Opera".. nice poem Rose

[SyberRose]

Thank you Stella...yes me too...I have the cd...thanks for peeking in...Hugss

[Archangel Gabriel]

This made me think of you reflecting on your own thoughts and your own mind. It had touches of mystery, ghoulish echoes and yet a soft ethereal touch.

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much...and for peeking in today...nice to hear from you...Rose:)

[Frieda P]

First thing I thought of was Phantom upon reading this, love that play, have seen it three times, your poetry weaves a lovely melody around the aura of that magnificence.

[SyberRose]

Yes I love that music too...I have the cd...Glad you enjoyed it Frieda:)