Destiny

A Rendezvous Poem

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  Will we meet in the sunshine?

   under the mulberry tree

  Or meet in the seclusion of night~

  All this time I have wondered

  What will it be like?

                                 

  Will my heart still wonder?

   Alone in our rendezvous…

  Our secret garden of romance,

  At last I will be alone with you~

                                 

  Our silhouettes will embrace,

  On satin sheets of blue;

  Upon the wall of discreet

  In the mirror of breathless hue~

                                 

  I will count each second and minute,

  Until the final hour arrives…

  Wrapped in your arms my love;

  Will the passion in the night survive?

                                 

  Together we will surrender;

  To the orgasm of once fantasy~

  You and I my belove~

  Call me by my name...Destiny.

   

  ©SyberRose

Reviews

[Archangel Gabriel]

A nice gentle lilt of a poem Rose. Not sure about the use of 'hour' twice in the penultimate stanza?

[SyberRose]

Thanks for pointing that out...Ill change it...thanks for visiting again today...Rose:)

[Archangel Gabriel]

Yes that does read much better. Thanks Rose.

[quinfinn]

there is a lilting lullaby quality in this write, so magical and ethereal...yet almost tactile as well. nicely done!

[SyberRose]

Thank you Quin I was just on my way to read yours when I got this response...see you soon.:)

[Pollai]

A really nice and elegant write Rose, I enjoyed the wording and thought the accompanying painting was perfect.

[SyberRose]

Thank you Pollai...yes I loved that painting too...thank you for visiting today...Rose:)

[Ency Bearis]

Ah such so lovely and enthralliing words and can be destined for sweet passion. Beautiful write.

[SyberRose]

Thank you very much Ency...I'm glad you enjoyed and thank you for taking time to read...Rose:)

[redflutterby]

Oh that painting is just beautiful...and fits your words so well. Fantastic poem...a lovely jewel!! ;-)

[SyberRose]

Thank you Red and so glad you enjoyed it...yes I loved that painting too...Rose:)

[Sami Khalil]

I was destined to read this wonderful write and I choose to like it ...Thank you for sharing...:)

[SyberRose]

Thank you Sami...nice to see you peeking in tonight as always...and your are welcome:)

[Sami Khalil]

till peeking in...You are welcome...:)

[Shaun Payton]

A mysterious air to this, destiny. I fell into a daydream while reading this..wonderfully written. Quickly becoming one of my favorites Rose.

[SyberRose]

Thank you shaun...i'm glad you enjoyed this...and appreciate your nice comments as always:)

[Shaun Payton]

:) My truest pleasure Rose.