Dewdrops of Morn

Winds carry thoughts to distant places

Like fluffy seeds of a dandelion

 

While love blooms within moon phases

 And the starlight of Orion

 

In mandarin flames of the dawn

Remnants of the night trickle down

 

 Teardrops in dark eyes of a fawn

Disappear as they echo to the ground

 

Tears become dewdrops upon roses,

And the morn awakens without a sound.

 

And the wind of the light of dawn

Drift to the other side of the moon

 

Where the lavender twilight hour

Sleep’s in the ripples of a dark Lagoon.

 

©SyberRose

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading.

Reviews

[B-poet]

Loved the imagery, poetic flow and the overall theme of this finely written piece. Great work. :)

[SyberRose]

Thank you Bpoet very much...nice to hear from you as always...Rose:)

[Soma-ko]

A lovely read. Sadly, like the other poem I just reviewed, I don't really have much to say... Only that I truly enjoyed the poem. :)

[SyberRose]

Thank you for reading...i'm glad you liked it though:)

[Soma-ko]

Of course. I enjoy all your styles of writing because of the content you describe so well. :)

[SyberRose]

Thank you and hope you are enjoying your summer.

[Soma-ko]

I am so far. The knowledge of no homework settles well with me. :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

I love the Yin/yang effects of the poem showing how balance brings beauty to the world. Wonderful writing.

[SyberRose]

Thank you Dale...I'm glad you liked this piece...thanks for peeking in tonight...Rose:)

[Sami Khalil]

"In mandarin flames of the dawn
Remnants of the night trickle down

And teardrops in dark eyes of a fawn
Disappears as they echo to the ground"
The only tears should be shed is those tears of joy upon reading this magnificent poem...I like the font too...Thank you for sharing...:)

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Sami...I like to use different fonts...so glad you enjoyed this piece...Rose:)

[Sami Khalil]

You know it . You are welcome....:)

[quinfinn]

i love the font choice in this write...exemplifies and amplifies the mood of the scene. your wording is like sweet dew forming upon the tops of gentle flowers of dawn...exquisite!

[SyberRose]

Thank you Quin...the font is Segoe script...I'm glad you enjoyed this piece and thanks for peeking in:)