Dewdrops of Morn

Winds carry thoughts to distant places

Like fluffy seeds of a dandelion

 

While love blooms within moon phases

 And the starlight of Orion

 

In mandarin flames of the dawn

Remnants of the night trickle down

 

 Teardrops in dark eyes of a fawn

Disappear as they echo to the ground

 

Tears become dewdrops upon roses,

And the morn awakens without a sound.

 

And the wind of the light of dawn

Drift to the other side of the moon

 

Where the lavender twilight hour

Sleep’s in the ripples of a dark Lagoon.

 

©SyberRose

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading.

Reviews

[Stella Armour]

lovely rhyming scheme her Rose.. delightful

[SyberRose]

Im glad you enjoyed it Stella...hugss

[s y e]

First thing I noticed was the structure was different. I loved the imagery and the use of colour as Jack, pointed out. Amazing as alwayss, love!

~ Noodle.

[SyberRose]

Yes I try to do different forms...thank you so much Sye for peeking in:)

[Jack...]

So very peaceful and calming was you piece this afternoon. I love the use of color and imagery and as always, the entire work that sits here in front of me. Very nice.

[SyberRose]

Thank you Jack...I'm so happy you enjoyed it...and appreciate your comments...Rose

[Ency Bearis]

Fantastic words and well poetized.

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Ency and hope you are having a nice summer:)

[Frieda P]

Magical words here, they float as you read them.....

Where the lavender twilight hour
Sleeps in the ripples of a dark Lagoon.

Stunning, Rose.

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Frieda...I'm glad you liked this piece...Rose:)

[Frieda P]

Always a pleasure Rose :-)

[Archangel Gabriel]

This has a very ethereal feel to it, a sort of magic quality of a dream.

[SyberRose]

Thank you and nice to hear from you...glad you enjoyed...Rose:)

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Such beautiful imagery in this one. I always enjoy reading a piece that truly gets to the heart of standing within the axis of natural beauty--I can see the stars, feel the breeze, and above all, I can see the many phases of the beautiful moon. Such a tapestry woven here of delicious images and emotional references. Well done.

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Sarah...and for that lovely review...and I made sure I looked out and saw
that super moon last night...as sometimes I never take time to look at it....Rose:)

[Zahra]

Beautiful, Rose, wonderfuly woven emotions, eloquent piece.

[SyberRose]

I'm glad you enjoyed this piece...thank you for visiting...Rose:)

[Shaun Payton]

I love the moon. I love your poem. :)

[SyberRose]

Super moon tonight...but im surrounded by trees haa...thanks Shaun.

[Shaun Payton]

Its bright over here by the water. Beautiful moon! You are welcome Rose:)

[NA]

A pleasure to read,wonderful imagery ...simply stunning...enjoyed :)

[SyberRose]

Thank you Raven for peeking in tonight...Rose:)