Message in a Bottle

Message in a Bottle

A Poem by SyberRose
"

Inspired by Vincents Prose Poem

"
Dear Friend,

If you should find this message on a distant shore

somewhere on an island of no return;

Please know my words have traveled a long way

upon the waves of turbulence,

in the heat of the sun and the light of the moon~


I was calling to you from the crest of the waves

waiting for you to find me.

Hold this bottle in the warmth of your hand

because it was a long cold journey

this thing called life~


I was just a soul like you,

but my life is almost over and these words

you read breathes new life into me~


Remember when there is no one to love you;

feel my words wrap around your soul

because I know now that you found

“my message in the bottle”

The spirit in which this message brings

will forever live and breathe in your heart~


If you have ever loved and lost

and tasted fruit of the forbidden tree

remember life will go on, and the moon

will always shine and maybe next time

they will be worthy of you~


And if you don't find that special someone

remember you still have a chance;

because I'm afraid it is too late for me.~


Next time you have a romantic dinner;

light a candle within this bottle

so that I may smile within the flame

and dance within the shadows.


Love,


Blue~


©SyberRose





© 2013 SyberRose


Author's Note

SyberRose
Thank you for reading this prose poem.

My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

"upon the waves of turbulence,
in the heat of the sun and the light of the moon" superb imagery as usual Rose. I could literally see the little greenish bottle with a cork in bobbing among the white horses.
I love your work
x

Posted 11 Years Ago


ANTO

11 Years Ago

lol - hey whats happening ? I wanted to just write lol and the "writey-comments-widget" - techn.. read more
SyberRose

11 Years Ago

haa...I don't know...i guess i dont except yes and no answers:)
ANTO

11 Years Ago

No, no no no no no, I mean yes, yes yes
x
Very nice, such a unique verses, and a lovely message presented.

Posted 11 Years Ago


SyberRose

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much Ency...it was inspired by Vincents poem about leaving a message in a bottle.:)
Ency Bearis

11 Years Ago

My pleasure and you're welcome.
[send message][befriend] Subscribe
NA
That was so beautiful, really stirred the heart....loved it :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


SyberRose

11 Years Ago

Thank you Raven...happy you enjoyed it:)
Wow.
Just...
Wow.
This is a magnificent write. You have brought tears to this old lady's eyes...they are sad tears, for love long lost...but they are happy tears, too.
Thank you for posting this beautiful piece, and sharing it with us.
Well done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


SyberRose

11 Years Ago

Thank you for those nice compliments...I appreciate your visit tonight...Rose:)
This is beautiful, Rose. To receive such a message... would be to never feel alone. Ethereal, romantic, amazing piece.

Next time you have a romantic dinner;
light a candle within this bottle
so that I may smile within the flame
and dance within the shadows.

I love this imagery. Spectacular write!

Posted 11 Years Ago


SyberRose

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much Rita...i'm really happy you enjoyed this piece...Rose:)
third stanza...."these words you read breathe new life into me"

this is hauntingly beautiful...and reminds me of what my therapist often said to me about my three failed marriages...they were the wrong people...and you will find someone who is for you...i hate to use the word "worthy"--i think that problem is more within ourselves...we have to go for what we need...and feel we deserve the best.

wonderful poetry, you are consistent.

jacob

Posted 11 Years Ago


SyberRose

11 Years Ago

thank you Jacob...glad you enjoyed...I was inspired by Vincents poem about a message in a bottle.:)
[send message][befriend] Subscribe
yes
WOW, ( Thank you Vincent for pointing me in the direction)
sometimes when I wander in somewhere out of nowhere I see thoughts
spun onto words I know from whispers I've sent on the wind...
This is an amazing poem....
Take Care...
You Matter...
)0(
ladyblue

Posted 11 Years Ago


SyberRose

11 Years Ago

Thank you for taking time read and comment...I appreciate your visit...Rose:)
yes

11 Years Ago

You are very Welcome....
Have a Wonderful Summer Soltice!!!
Oh my, this is so beautifully written, you've move me Ms Rose with your magnificent imagery and words. Can one imagine receiving such a bottle like yours with the message contained therein of such love and sadness combined. I am so moved, this my dear goes into my library to be read and shared again. I am happy that I inspired you in a small way for you to be so creative with your inspiring message in a bottle. Simply breathless I am, thank you for sharing. Rate 100, tweeted and shared.

Posted 11 Years Ago


SyberRose

11 Years Ago

Thank you for inspiring me Vincent...and I'm happy you enjoyed reading...it certainly is different t.. read more
The power of your imagination is great and the message in this bottle is the powerful love and romance you are trying to spread to whomsoever wants to receive it bringing joy to their shores...Bravo
Still peeping in...:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


SyberRose

11 Years Ago

You can peek in anytime you want haa...thank you Sami...I was inspired by Vincents poem.:)
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

Good to know...You are welcome...:)

3
next Next Page
last Last Page
Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

1056 Views
29 Reviews
Rating
Shelved in 3 Libraries
Added on June 21, 2013
Last Updated on June 24, 2013
Tags: syberrose, message, bottle, moon, waves, shadows, prose, poetry, love

Author

SyberRose
SyberRose

VA



About
Welcome to my profile: I was born in England, and raised in the U.S and now living in Virginia. I write mostly of romance and nature....I prefer not to send read requests so if you wish just read at y.. more..

Writing

Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..