Whispers of Goodbye

Passionate heat of the sun

replenishes his touch,

and moonlight of his smile

dances like white rose buds~

And as the summer breeze

runs its fingers though her hair,

sweet petals of kisses

linger upon her shoulders bare~

Whispers of goodbye

in the sails of the wind,

and his signature

forever upon her skin~

But he is free as a turtle dove

free from safe harbors

and the commitments

of true love~

©SyberRose

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Rita L. Sev]

free from safe harbors
and the commitments
of true love...

Only in true love do we find complete freedom. This is a beautiful write, Rose!

[SyberRose]

Thank you Rita...I'm happy you enjoyed it...thanks for peeking in...Rose:)

[NA]

Oh this is breathtaking...and the graphic is just stunning...beautifully written and presented :)

[SyberRose]

thank you Raven...so glad you liked this piece...nice to hear from you tonight...:)

[s y e]

Another romantic write from you, Rose and that picture is stunning! :-)

Your writing is stunning, as always.

~ Noodle.

[SyberRose]

thank you so much Sye...and for peeking in...:)

[s y e]

My pleasure!

[Pollai]

Nice write, I like the contrast between the last 2 lines of stanza 3 and first 2 lines of stanza 4.

"and his signature

forever upon her skin~


But he is free as a turtle dove

free from safe harbors"

Good work :)

[SyberRose]

Thanks Pollai...and for taking time to read and comment today...Rose:)

[Soma-ko]

Another beautiful write on romance. My main guess is that the girl is now pregnant with his child, hence his signature is upon her skin, though he is free, simply because he left her. Just my raw take away from the last two stanzas, and if I'm wrong, I would love to be corrected (since my interpretations are usually more negative). Vivid read, and much enjoyed. :)

[SyberRose]

that is a wonderful interpretation although It didn't cross my mind as I wrote it...but I like the
interpretations of other readers...so nice to hear from you as always Soma:)

[Soma-ko]

It is a pleasure to read your poems. :)

[Stella Armour]

sometimes freedom is preferable Rose..

[Sami Khalil]

A sweet one indeed. I feel a little sad tone to it...Well done...

"Whispers of goodbye
in the sails of the wind,
and his signature
forever upon her skin~"

[SyberRose]

Thank you Sami...so nice hearing from you this morning...hope you have a great day...Rose:)

[Sami Khalil]

You too kind lady...:)

[Onku Ghosh]

Lovely romantic write.Loved the lines "passionate heat of the sun," "sweet petals of kisses/ linger upon her shoulder bare," And "whispers of goodbye/in the sails of the wind."Wonderful !!!

[SyberRose]

Thank you Onku...i'm glad you enjoyed those lines and thank you for taking time to comment:)