Would You?

Painting by Billie Feng

Would you like to spend the night?

listening to the raindrops fall

While the ecstasy of the rain

flows with passion down the wall~

Would you like to spend the night?

wrapped in my love so warm

While the candle flickers with desire

while our shadows tremble in the storm~

Would you like to spend the night?

in our dark wonderland

And the only thing I wear

is just one pearl on a strand~

Would you like to spend the night?

under a canopy of lace

On ivory sheets of satin

in our silhouetted embrace~

©SyberRose

Author's Note

Thank you for reading.

Reviews

[Zahra]

A sweet poem, beautifully written. Very nice rose.

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much and have a nice day...Rose:)

[Cassie]

No one would love this, this is so romantically written

[SyberRose]

Thank you Cassie...and for peeking in today...Rose:)

[Cassie]

I meant to say no wouldnt love this...

[SyberRose]

I know what you meant haa

[Cassie]

Hahaha hahah

[mark]

wow this is a really well written poem such sweet words :) well done. i enjoyed reading this one :) keep writing :)

[SyberRose]

thank you Mark...I'm glad you enjoyed the poem...Rose:)

[mark]

i did and ur welcome...mark

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

this was extremely romantic and very sweet. About anyone in particular or? the title was great and the way it was set out was great. I quite enjoyed reading that

[SyberRose]

thank you...No it was just a poem dear...but I'm glad you enjoyed it...Rose:)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

ur most welcome :)

[Betty]

Wow what a beautiful poem. Enjoyed it VERY much. :)

[SyberRose]

Thank you Betty...I'm happy you liked it...Rose

[Rahul]

nicely penned, great job once again, keep writing.100/100

[SyberRose]

Thank you Rahul...so nice of you to visit my poetry again this morning...I do appreciate it and Ill come by and visit yours...Rose

["Fanatical Dreamer"]

Love it! You're such a good writer

[SyberRose]

Thank you for your nice comments...I just think of myself as a poet...:)

["Fanatical Dreamer"]

Okay well I rephrase you're such a good poet,without a doubt!

[B-poet]

This is an enticing and luring invitation so chosen lovers can walk through the doors of pleasurable sensuality after dark. A fine write and read. Nice work. :)

[SyberRose]

thank you Bpoet...I appreciate your visit as always...Rose:)