Senryu

For Senryu funny Contest

military man

swallows his blue viagra

stands at attention

©SyberRose

Author's Note

thank you for reading

Reviews

[redflutterby]

Bahahaha... whoot whoo!! You did it!! Naughty and funny..love it!

[SyberRose]

Thank you Red...glad you enjoyed my first senryu...Rose:)

[SteveB]

I salute you. Witty, well phrased, and deliciously bawdy.

[SyberRose]

Thank you Steve...yes I jumped on the bandwagon ha...thanks for peeking in as always:)

[WILDERNESS]

ha, but dear what about the military woman ................. ah yes , the military man !

[SyberRose]

haa...yes...the woman is another poem about another pill...:)

[John Phoenix Hutchinson..]

Am thick! I read this three times till I realized what you were on about! Quite a 'hard' poem really to decipher but the last line is 'firm' and holds the whole thing 'up' quite well :)

We should 'erect' a monument to this piece! Well done.

[SyberRose]

you will have to enter the contest John...read about the senyru...its suppose to be 575 and funny.read moreyou will have to enter the contest John...read about the senyru...its suppose to be 575 and funny.
A funny response though...I wanted a picture but didnt know what to go with...ha

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

Blimey i've only just got my head round the 575 and now she wants me to be funny too!

[SyberRose]

You can do it!

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

I doubt it judging by this the competition is a bit stiff!

[SyberRose]

haa

[Sami Khalil]

Hahaha. This is so funny and done so well...Bravo

[SyberRose]

I thought it was but didnt know if anyone else would like it haa....thanks Sami:)

[Sami Khalil]

Good stuff. Different ...:)