Senryu

For Senryu funny Contest

military man

swallows his blue viagra

stands at attention

©SyberRose

Author's Note

thank you for reading

Reviews

[Pollai]

Haha, very nice. This is hilarious. You have my vote :P

[SyberRose]

Haa...thanks...glad you enjoyed this ...Rose:)

[Holly Mason]

I am trying to hang with you girls on the porch but this one made me red!!
what a write
thank you for the blush truly

[SyberRose]

Its for Babys contest...and now Frieda is doing a challenge but I haven't done that one just yet...ha:)

[Dr. Wood ?]

and salutes presumably

[SyberRose]

Yes of course...thank you for peeking in today...Rose:)

[John Phoenix Hutchinson..]

This poem is still hard to take. ;)

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

Damn I've already used that metaphor......so to speak......what a cockup ! :)

[SyberRose]

These seventeen syllable poems are going to drive you crazy haa...It hard to find a photo though...you found a good photo for yours...:)

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

I expect there are plenty of photos online or this subject but and I hazard a guess here you would not be permitted to use any of them.

[SyberRose]

haa...no I better not use a photo

[Stella Armour]

well..i hardly know what to say.... the imagery is really hilarious.. well done Rose

[SyberRose]

Thank you Stella dear...hugss

[Magnolia]

Brilliant !...lost for more words...lol

[SyberRose]

Thank you Magnolia...Join the contest!!...Rose

[Frieda P]

Bhahahaha!

[SyberRose]

Thanks for peeking in Frieda ha...:)

[Frieda P]

Thanks for the shytes and giggles Rose ;-P

[SyberRose]

Youre welcome :)

[Rita L. Sev]

Ha! Really funny; great job, Rose!

[SyberRose]

Thank you Rita...glad you liked it:)

[Soma-ko]

I hope its not weird that I realized and laughed at this poem on the first time of reading it. Ah, my immaturity is being brought out. Hilarious poem, and enjoyed thoroughly.

[SyberRose]

Its for a funny senryu contest...haa..thanks:)

[Soma-ko]

No problem. I kept seeing "senryu" poems, and I had no idea what it was, so I finally looked it up, and it looks unique. Perhaps I'll try it later on.

[SyberRose]

yes about human nature...

[Soma-ko]

It's more about the format that I find interesting, and human nature.

[SyberRose]

yes well the format i used was 5-7-5...that was the form they wanted to the contest.

[Soma-ko]

Ohhh, so that's what you meant by 575. I thought that was another contest. Much more sense.

[SyberRose]

yes syllables on each line

[Soma-ko]

A haiku for the human nature, instead of nature itself, huh?

[SyberRose]

Yes thats right.

[ANTO]

Ohh Matron (best Kenneth Williams voice). That was pure moulin rouge SyberRose.

[SyberRose]

thank you so much Anthony...nice of you to drop by today...Rose