Dreamweaver

Painting by Josephine Wall

Interlaced threads of luster and silken seams

Weave a fantasy of gold taffeta dreams

Cross stitch kisses, promises and love notes

Embroidered whispers upon a sea afloat

Knit one purl two, a blanket under the stars

Needlepoint goblets of red wine afar

A gold cable stitch on left hand ring finger

A chain stitch linking our lives together

Before the bobbin soon comes to an end

Hurry...spin him into this dreamweaver's blend

As this interweaving dream stitches to a close

Finishing with satin stitches and a red rose

©SyberRose

Author's Note

Thank you reading.

Reviews

[Patrick Henry]

"Raindrops on roses and whiskers on kittens".... I Love this. The font is tiny,but after copy/pasting it to a text document to make it larger, it was seen to be a most wonderful poem to read!! It also reminded me of a song I know. The language is gorgeous with the perfect timing and this silky swell of beats going up and down and ending the lines on these perfect little notes. This was fun to read, Rose.... The only thing that kinda messed with the "rhythm" within these pretty words, was where the lines read like this to me: This is how it is, This is how it is, This is how etc..... Wonderful job and to throw "purl" in there was awesome. To even make the connection in lines between such a rare word and the sea was very nice. xoxo -Mark

[SyberRose]

Thank you I enjoy hearing your comments...I usually use the #12 font...on the postings...I guess everyones eyes are different though...thanks for peeking in Mark...Rose:)

[ANTO]

"Knit one purl two - a blanket under the stars". Two of my most warm thoughts combined here SyberRose - my mothers mantra knit one purl x... and my wish to sleep under the stars somewhere that doesn't have light pollution. Makes this one personal and moving... thank you

[SyberRose]

Thank you Anthony...It's nice you can relate to this poem...thank you for peeking in
and commenting...Rose:)

[Saumya]

great work...!!!
well done....!!!

[SyberRose]

Glad you enjoyed Saumya:)

[Saumya]

highly welcomed my dear friend.....!!!! :)

[LJW]

Interlaced.......

Weaver......
....dreamweaver's

Oh I know I'll get retaliatory comments for this but I really don't care.
This is a top write? Writing 101...proofread. Then proofread. Then proofread.

No matter how eloquent a poem may be, mistakes distract.

[SyberRose]

I will edit this right away ha...and thank you for popping in with your comments...Rose

[Onku Ghosh]

So very charming.I just loved it.Imagination at its best and the lines, so appealing.I shall shelve it in the library so that I can read it again nad again

[QuietlyCrash]

This is absolutely beautiful! Like always I adore the title :) I instantly thought of the song.

[SyberRose]

thank you very much...Like your new photo too...:)

[John Phoenix Hutchinson..]

Finishing with satin stitches and a Syber Rose.
:)

[SyberRose]

Ha...yes...Thank you John for peeking in today...Rose:)

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

Always a pleasure never a chore :)

[B-poet]

Excellent write my fellow writing partner. Vivid imagery and eloquent diction at its best. :)

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much...and nice hearing from you today too...:)

[Another Poet]

Woow beautiful! You are very good.

[SyberRose]

Thank you dear...such a cute little teddy bear:)

[Another Poet]

hahah yeah I like the teddy bear too!

[Stella Armour]

beautifully spun Rose... a delight to read

[SyberRose]

Thanks Stella...glad you enjoyed...Hugss

[Rita L. Sev]

This is a wonderfully formed metaphor - as I sit here with a basket of crochet next to me!

[SyberRose]

haa...well you probably know more about it then i do Rita...im just faking my way thru this haa