Haiku for Photo

The Milky Way Over Monument Valley

valley of the rocks

navajo smoke signals rise

pray for love and peace.

©SyberRose

Author's Note

http://apod.nasa.gov/apod/ap120801.html
The Milky Way Over Monument Valley
Image Credit & Copyright: Wally Pacholka (AstroPics.com, TWAN)

Reviews

[emmajoy]

Beautiful: words gentle, beautiful - sky magnificent.

[SyberRose]

thank you Emma for peeking in again...Ill be paying you a visit soon...:)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

there is something peaceful in watching smoke signals...

the puffs gently colliding with the sky.

[SyberRose]

Thank you Jacob...I have to change prayers to pray...i was thinking it had one syllable.:)

[Saumya]

thank you sooooo very much for sharing....!!!!
really loved this unique presentation...!!!!!
:) :) :) :)

[SyberRose]

Thank you Saumya...and for the nice visit:)

[Saumya]

thank you and welcome to you too my dear friend...!!!
:))

[Ency Bearis]

Beautiful night sky you presented. Nice Haiku, but I think it did not conform with the 5/7/5 syllables. Last line had six syllables. If it will be for modern Haiku it can be. Just noticing the standard structure of Haiku.

[SyberRose]

So does prayers have two syllables?..I thought it had one for some reason...but thanks for bringing that to my attention...I will have to change something...:) i wil change to pray instead.

[Saumya]

oh my God...!!!!
this is reallllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllly beautiful.....!!!
i would like to tell you dear, i am a big fan of of such great landscapes.... and i just loved it...!!!!!
thank y

[prashant harsh]

its something a av neva seen before thanx for bringing this :)

[SyberRose]

Your welcome and thank you for commenting...appreciate it...Rose

[Frieda P]

The photo and your haiku are enchanting, go together so beautifully, nice job Rose.

[SyberRose]

Thanks Frieda...glad you enjoyed it...it was a challenge in another forum...Rose

[redflutterby]

What an amazing pic. I'm a quarter Navajo so this made me smile. Hope to visit that area someday. One of many things on my bucket list. Wonderful haiku Rose!!

[SyberRose]

Oh really...well how about that...well i hope you do ...yes a beautiful photo indeed...Rose

[redflutterby]

The culture is very interesting. They are a matriarchal tribe...and traditionally when couples married they lived with the woman's family. The eldest female is considered to be the wisest in each clan. ;-)

[SyberRose]

Wow...i wish my family looked at me like that haa..

[redflutterby]

Lol....me too!!! :-)

[Cool Handless Luke]

The task of haiku's is being able to say so much with so few words that aren't even really allowed to flow because of the structure itself. You have managed to shine through those obstacles marvelously here Rose. Nice work.

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much...im really glad you liked it...thanks for visiting tonight...:)

[SteveB]

Brava!
Excellently structured and beautifully worded.
And a lovely moving sentiment.

[SyberRose]

Thank you very much Steve...Happy you liked it:) and thanks for peeking in.

[SteveB]

It is always my pleasure to peek. Wait that sounded bad.

[SyberRose]

haa...anytime