Dusk 'Til Dawn

Dusk 'Til Dawn

A Poem by SyberRose



Was it the end of the beginning,
or the beginning of the end?
when we met for the first time.
We were two candles burning bright
burning all through the night,
It was the end of the beginning,
from dusk 'til dawn.
Was it I who loved you more,
or did I love you less?
when we said our final good byes.
We were two candles in the wind
as moonlight softly kissed our skin;
It was I who loved you more
from dusk 'til dawn.
I pretended you were mine
in the arms of another time,
holding hands in the mist of the rain.
Two candles burning bright
as tears flowed down the wick of night;
I pretended you were mine
from dusk 'til dawn.

©SyberRose

© 2013 SyberRose


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SyberRose
thank you for reading.

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oh my, i love this, the first two lines are platinum, but i noticed you segue each stanza very nicely with its own clever reversal in tense and sense. this is very , very good. impressive in many ways!

Posted 11 Years Ago


SyberRose

11 Years Ago

I'm glad you enjoyed it Quin...I enjoyed writing it...thank you so much...Rose

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Added on June 6, 2013
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SyberRose
SyberRose

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Welcome to my profile: I was born in England, and raised in the U.S and now living in Virginia. I write mostly of romance and nature....I prefer not to send read requests so if you wish just read at y.. more..

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