The Twilight Hour

Painting by Deviant Art

 

Come with me, through the twilight hour
While moist dew, flows like a teardrop
On every dark rose, and sweet flower
Come take my hand, to the mountain tops

 

The purple fog will weave a web of love
You will be mine, until tomorrow
When the kiss of dew, is upon the earths crust
Then my love for you, will turn to sorrow

 

And as you leave, and go on your way
Just maybe we will meet again
My lonesome tears, will flow into the bay
Down the mountain tops, until then

 

As long as the moon guides the dark shadows
I will mourn our love like a black widow.

 

©SyberRose

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading.

Reviews

[Soma-ko]

Though the picket fence he walked,
Into a field of lingering distraught.
Shoes made wet from the dew just formed,
Making his way to the opened door.

His face shone, like the moon's ray that night,
Making me feel full of bliss at his sight.
Tears leaked through my eyes, for they were held captive,
Restrained from leaving, when he left me feeling hapless.

The night still shrouded the moving earth,
My feelings for him were everything but dearth.
As he came closer, it was harder to see,
Any of his features, for it was just a dream.

Sorry if this bored you, but I made this up after reading this poem. This poem definitely held dark aspects to it as it neared the end, and I enjoyed reading it from the start to the finish.

[SyberRose]

thanks very nice...well you are a fast writer ha...faster then I am..Im glad you enjoyed.
Rose

[Soma-ko]

All of my work is basically what I'm thinking, but placed in a poem format. Ergo, for me personally, excruciating boredom is extremely helpful. I'll be waiting for your next piece as well, keep up the awesome poems.

[Vikrantsingh]

Initially I thought its Twilight - Movie (I hate those drama)
But later when I read your poem - One Word "Magic"
Simply wonderful and similarly, you went with the flow.

"The purple fog will weave a web of love
You will be mine, until tomorrow
When the kiss of dew, is upon the earths crust
Then my love for you, will turn to sorrow"

Simply loved these lines - SyberRose

Keep writing.

Cheers!
Singh :)

[SyberRose]

thank you Singh...Im glad you enjoyed the poem...thanks for visiting today.
Rose

[Vikrantsingh]

I would keep popping and will share my reviews. I don't critic or point out errors in poem, as i'm still learning :)

Will love to visit your page more often :)
Cheers!!
Singh :)

[Angi]

A fleeting moment in the moonlight. The imagery takes me there beautifully, SyberRose. Lovely.

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much ...and for peeking in today...Glad you enjoyed Angi...Rose

[Angi]

My pleasure!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i feel this a lot...long distance relationship....all of that closeness..like dew on flowers...and then the garden becomes bare with the distance...and all that we enjoy together takes on such different connotation when we are apart.

really nice poem, Rose.

jacob

[SyberRose]

Thanks Jacob...i'm glad you enjoyed reading my bittersweet words...Rose