The Twilight Hour

Painting by Deviant Art

 

Come with me, through the twilight hour
While moist dew, flows like a teardrop
On every dark rose, and sweet flower
Come take my hand, to the mountain tops

 

The purple fog will weave a web of love
You will be mine, until tomorrow
When the kiss of dew, is upon the earths crust
Then my love for you, will turn to sorrow

 

And as you leave, and go on your way
Just maybe we will meet again
My lonesome tears, will flow into the bay
Down the mountain tops, until then

 

As long as the moon guides the dark shadows
I will mourn our love like a black widow.

 

©SyberRose

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading.

Reviews

[Soma-ko]

Though the picket fence he walked,
Into a field of lingering distraught.
Shoes made wet from the dew just formed,
Making his way to the opened door.

His face shone, like the moon's ray that night,
Making me feel full of bliss at his sight.
Tears leaked through my eyes, for they were held captive,
Restrained from leaving, when he left me feeling hapless.

The night still shrouded the moving earth,
My feelings for him were everything but dearth.
As he came closer, it was harder to see,
Any of his features, for it was just a dream.

Sorry if this bored you, but I made this up after reading this poem. This poem definitely held dark aspects to it as it neared the end, and I enjoyed reading it from the start to the finish.

[SyberRose]

thanks very nice...well you are a fast writer ha...faster then I am..Im glad you enjoyed.
Rose

[Soma-ko]

All of my work is basically what I'm thinking, but placed in a poem format. Ergo, for me personally, excruciating boredom is extremely helpful. I'll be waiting for your next piece as well, keep up the awesome poems.

[Ashley Armstrong]

I love the picture this poem paints in my mind. Good job.

[SyberRose]

Thank you Ashley...Im glad you enjoyed...Rose

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

This was quite well done. I enjoyed the imagery, and the metaphors that weave love with nature are very nicely done. I also like how you used "web of love" and then "black widow" at the end; a nice bit of foreshadowing that leads us to a little different place in terms of emotion. All in all, I found this quite breathtaking.

[SyberRose]

Thank you very much Sarah and for peeking in...I appreciate your nice comments...Rose

[Arthur Henn]

I am a big fan of nature's love. (The Twilight Hour) this beautiful title caught my eye and then I read for the first time you words of poetry.

Early dawn and twilight are my two favorite loves of nature besides its tree's of love.

Dawn and twilight. What a beautiful romance in our skies. Thank You for sharing.

[SyberRose]

Thank you Arthur...for that lovely response...Im happy you enjoyed...Rose

[WILDERNESS]

What wouldn't one give for such love................. for such a soulmate..............beautiful as Rose

[SyberRose]

Thank you for peeking in today...so glad you enjoyed...I always appreciate your nice comments...Rose

[WILDERNESS]

The pleasure is all mine................... your beautiful poems are a treat

[Brandon S. Whitten]

Splendid read and write, as always.

[SyberRose]

Thank you brandon...nice to hear from you this morning...Im glad you enjoyed.
Rose

[DeletedAccount156]

You show the ups and downs to light and dark, the good and bad, great force and evil, this was deep and sentimental, and it really stroked my heart!

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Ashley...I'm glad you enjoyed my poem this morning...Rose

[DeletedAccount156]

I enjoyed it very much and was very very impressed with it! Thank you for allowing me to read such a beautiful piece of work!

[Sami Khalil]

"Just maybe we will meet again
My lonesome tears, will flow into the bay
Down the mountain tops, until then



As long as the moon guides the dark shadows
I will mourn our love like a black widow."
This write is fading into the twilight of love but rising with the moonbeams of hope...A very magical write...:)

[SyberRose]

Thank you Sami...I'm happy you enjoyed...and hope you are having a nice night.

[Sami Khalil]

I did...You too...:)

[Stella Armour]

i love the magic of twilight..lovely penning Rose..

[SyberRose]

thank you Stella...yes I like it too...magic is a good word for it...hugss

[Peter H]

i enjoyed this one . its very hard to have a relationship or a lover you hardly see . the moments you spend with them feel surreal you captured this moment with excellent imagery here .

[SyberRose]

Thank you very much for peeking in today...Rose