A Rendezvous in The Park

A rendezvous in the park and white swans on the pond;

Near the Canterbury bells ~ in the garden I am fond

The ripple of water as you cross over the bridge;

And scent of sweet lavender and a yellow buttercup ridge~

 

I will be dressed in black blended into the dark

On an ivy covered bench waiting for you to embark;

I will be waiting for you under the chestnut tree;

Waiting to give you my love~to give you all of me~

 

Just the moonlight on my hair as the blackbirds sleep

Falling into your arms~on your shoulder I will weep,

If we wish upon a star maybe we can creep;

Into a dream lost forever~a forever lovers sleep~

 

©SyberRose

Author's Note

Thank you reading...Warmly SyberRose

Reviews

[Soma-ko]

The painting is eerie and ominous, which reflects the atmosphere the poem presents nicely. A sad poem, with a bit of hope in the last lines. Much enjoyed. :)

[SyberRose]

Thank you Soma...so nice to see you pop in as always...yes i liked the painting too...its always fun looking for the right painting...:)

[Soma-ko]

Haha, and also the paintings we find along the way. It's also very fulfilling when you find the perfect one, that matches your feeling/words. :)

[Rita L. Sev]

Nature bows to your pen, Rose - beautiful!

Your poem reminds me of a book I loved as a child, called "Magic in the Park". In it, two birds become human, and try to make sense of our world. Thank you for taking me back this morning!

[SyberRose]

I never heard of that book..I'm glad I took you back Rita...sounds like a cute book...thank you for peeking in as always...Rose:)

[Jack...]

Good morning Rose...well it is since I have found your beautiful poem waiting for me. Another romanticcally gorgeous piece you have brought us this day. Thank you so much for sharing your lovely work with us.

[SyberRose]

Good morning to you too Jack and thank you for your nice compliments...I'm glad you liked this one...Rose:)

[Jack...]

It seems everything you write I like. You ar welcome my friend.

[quinfinn]

you make it sound natural and easy. nicely done.

[SyberRose]

Thank you Quin...and congratulations for being contest winner(Babys)...Rose

[quinfinn]

you're welcome, and thanks for noticing

[Ency Bearis]

Captivating verses with such delightful words, impressive great piece.

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Ency...Glad you enjoyed this piece...Rose:)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Another romantic piece mixed with some dark mystery... you are quite the enchantress.

[SyberRose]

I like that name...ha...thank you so much Dale for peeking in tonight...Rose:)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Just call me the peeking cowboy.

[SyberRose]

haa...thats funny

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

Such romance... lovely piece, Rose.

[SyberRose]

Thank you Travis...I appreciate your nice comments...Rose

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

It's always a pleasure.

[Sami Khalil]

A beautiful and enchanting romantic poem that crosses the bridge of loneliness into the arms and promises of the beloved penned by an excellent pen . Thank you for sharing ...:)

[SyberRose]

Thank you and you are very welcome Sami...and so nice to hear from you this evening...Rose:)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome ...always ...:)

[B-poet]

A fine romantic write. I loved how you were able to paint such a pretty picture. Pertaining to the allure of a friendly seduction brought on by the attraction towards the eye of the beholder. Great work. A riveting write and read. :)

[SyberRose]

Thank you for reading BP...and for peeking in tonight...:)

[Stella Armour]

a lovely rhyming scheme Rose, and a beautiful rendezvous just waiting to happen in that park...

[SyberRose]

Thank you Stella...I always appreciate your comments dear.

[Stella Armour]

i appreciate good poetry Rose...