Endearment

I hold you in the endearment of my heart
The way the arms of the night hold the moon
And for the sun and the stars to adore.
Not in shadows but upon mountaintops
Where the wingspan of eagles fly
And as we grow old together
Love is deeper than a winding river
More vibrant than an emerald valley

In the cameo of my mind,
And in the springtime of our love
Within the scent of sweet blossoms,
Our love will continue to bloom
Yet, in the winter of our life
Still, we will be springtime lovers.

©SyberRose

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[lee von cleef]

The first shoots of green grass,
The band circles drops to fresh water,
Gramma thick in the canyon's bottom, tucked out of the wind,
A new foal plays tag,
Apart alert alone...
Not lonely a four legged,
Sentinel
Eyes on the horizon
On his beginning
On his end...
And the sky laced with white streamers criss crossing layers
Top the setting shadow.

[SyberRose]

Wow...thanks for that comment....SyberRose

[Peter H]

this is a lovely poem the imagery of your love is beautiful and incandescent :) even in the coldest of times your love still flicker's brightly good poem

[SyberRose]

Thank you for reading an commenting...I appreciate it...SyberRose

[NITHIN PURPLE]

Not in shadows but upon mountaintops
Where the wingspan of eagles fly
And as we grow old together
Love is deeper than a winding river
More vibrant than an emerald valley









Serene captured lines nice...........

[SyberRose]

Thank you Nithin...glad you enjoyed my words...SyberRose

[NITHIN PURPLE]

welcome syber........

[Helen Crutchett]

Truly beautiful SyberRose! My senses were reeling with the delicious description throughout this. Well done!

Helena :)

[SyberRose]

Thank you Helena...I am happy you enjoyed my poem...and thank you again for peeking in...SyberRose

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

How sweet!

"And as we grow old together
Love is deeper than a winding river
More vibrant than an emerald valley"

I really admire a kind of love like this. Thanks for sharing this piece. :)

[Tai Ryens]

First love? Perhaps. The very thought of it resides in all our hearts.

[Jeffrey Gershom]

This is the kind of hope that I still have in my waning years. To have such feelings towards a person is truly priceless. Thank you for sharing.

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Jeff...I appreciate you peeking in today....SyberRose

[Dream Weaver]

This was and is simply beautiful SyberRose "Sigh" One
could only wish for such an endearing outcome.

D.W.

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much D.W....and for peeking in tonight...always nice hearing from you...SyberRose

[Dream Weaver]

As always, my pleasure SyberRose.

[Magnolia]

A pure love story ! From springtime to the winter of one's life. Lovely penning...Maggie

[SyberRose]

Thank you Maggie...nice to meet you and thanks for visiting...SyberRose

[Yellow Butterfly]

The impact from the words conveyed have touched me deeply....

You have painted such wonderful imagery throughout this amazing poem..


Beautifull penned SyberRose :O)

[SyberRose]

Thank you Yellow Butterfly...I appreciated your sweet comments...SyberRose