An Orchid Breeze

I wait for you upon the sands,
to float like driftwood back to me.
To feel your lips of heaven sent,
soft as moonlight upon the sea.
To warm my soul with touch of blush,
and undress needs with eyes of blue;
Whilst in arms of a midnight wind,
for this is all I ask of you.

'Tis your essence of musk I feed,
in the shadows of what is meant to be.
Upon dalliance of an orchid breeze,
'tis you in nakedness of night I see.
The blue lagoon within your eyes,
splashing over me like the tides.

 

©SyberRose

Author's Note

thank you for reading...Warmly, SyberRose

Reviews

[Androglossia]

Your words captivate me. You have successfully crafted them making all the aspects of the poem materialize. Very beautiful.

[SyberRose]

Maryanne...Thank you so much for your lovely comments and thank you for peeking in tonight...SyberRose

[Ency Bearis]

Beautiful poem with enchanting words, pleasure to read.

[SyberRose]

Thank you Ency...appreciate you taking time to visit...I was away so I am just catching up to my responses...SyberRose

[Diane Lockard]

Your words are very moving, and they paint pictures...

[SyberRose]

Thank you Diane...Its nice to hear from you...I was away for a few days so just catching up...SyberRose

[Muse]

Can I take your poem....and set it inside my home as a room freshener? The fragrant air...do I dare? Can I vacation there???? Getting out my Calgon...take me away. lol, nice work.

[SyberRose]

I think I will hang it in my house too ha...I didnt recognize you...you have a new photo...Thanks for peeking in even though your profile is closed haa...SyberRose

[Muse]

of course, I enjoy reading you.. :)

[SHEEMA HUQ]

written with a fragrant romance, really nice

[SyberRose]

thank you for reading Sheema...nice to hear from you...SyberRose

[Inkeyes]

I felt great after reading this. It paints the imagination with warm colours

[SyberRose]

Thank you for reading and commenting...SyberRose

[Azriel]

wow, so man beautiful images in this one, really love the tone of this poem, and the mood is so calm and peaceful. you really do have a great talent for capturing and creating such amazing images.

[SyberRose]

Thank you and nice hearing from you...glad you enjoyed...SyberRose

[NITHIN PURPLE]

wonderfull poem.....

[SyberRose]

Thank you for peeking in today...appreciate it...SyberRose

[NITHIN PURPLE]

welcome

[Siddhartha]

What an absolutely swooner! Loved the wordplay, the incredibly romantic imagery and the dreamlike atmosphere that pervades it.

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much for that spendid review...I do appreciate you taking time to read and to comment Siddhartha...SyberRose