The beauty of dusk to dawn.Painting by Josephine Wall
It is the call of the sea, the endless call that beckon, those
mysterious whispers seducing the stars to bathe within the frothy
crest of the waves.
It is the dawn as the sun rises sipping the
dew from the brim of morn, blooming like cherry blossoms in the
springtime.
It is the zephyrean lullaby of the sunset
drifting like burnt orange seaweed upon the
ocean disappearing beyond the horizon, as orange meringue
smolders into the embers of the past; into the purple twilight
hour.
It is the first glimpse of the moon that entices the night to
dance with the shadows into the unknown; as petals of the white lotus
flower bathe in ripples of moonlight.
"It is" indeed....I enjoyed this yesterday but had little to share how much I enjoy your style of creative writing. Although I have not had the time to comment as I would like, you are quickly becoming a favorite writer of mine in my brief time back here at WC. Your metaphoric phrasing paints an intoxicating phenomena of life well lived....I look forward to reading more of your lovely writing ~ It was a pleasure to stop by...
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Harlon...Thank you for those lovely comments and so nice of you to come and visit me tonight...I thi.. read moreHarlon...Thank you for those lovely comments and so nice of you to come and visit me tonight...I think we belong to the mutual admiration society. I am happy you have returned and I do love it here at the cafe. Warmly SyberRose
es, indeed, SyberRose, it is phenomenal, at least your writing of this poem is that. "It is" artfully describes the poetical daily life when you are in love. Our when the first born arrives. he verses you have given us are superb in their concept and beautifully told. I really felt this.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thank you Jerry...you always have such nice responses..and IT IS nice hearing from you again....look.. read moreThank you Jerry...you always have such nice responses..and IT IS nice hearing from you again....looking forward to reading you again too...SyberRose
Yes, totally agree with Chris ... phenominal ... especially this ...
"It is the first glimpse of the moon
that entices the night to dance
with the shadows into the unknown;
as petals
of the white lotus flower
bathe in ripples of moonlight."
Well done, my friend.
j.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thank you Jimmy...so nice to hear from you as always...and hope you are loving it here at the cafe.... read moreThank you Jimmy...so nice to hear from you as always...and hope you are loving it here at the cafe...SyberRose
Welcome to my profile: I was born in England, and raised in the U.S and now living in Virginia. I write mostly of romance and nature....I prefer not to send read requests so if you wish just read at y.. more..