Still In Love With You

Your smile brought sunshine to my eyes

That can freeze me in the aisle of a thousand miles

Your voice brought music to my ears

That I want to hear even for a thousand of years

Your laughter brought melody to my life

That can tickle even the tiniest fibres of my heart

 

I love the way you look at me

That can melt me into my knees

I love the way you cuddle me

That can put me into sleep

I love the way how you make me miss you

Making me grateful and appreciative of you

 

The only thing I ever wanted is YOU

The only thing I ever wished for is YOU

The only thing I ever wanted to be with is YOU

I wanted to be forever me and YOU

But...

 

You left and now we're apart

How can I mend this broken heart

You didn't even said goodbye

It hurts and I cannot lie

 

Tears continues to run down my face

I'm broken and you left me in pieces

The world now looks like a big space

Help me please, before my breath ceases

 

I expected you to explain

To neutralize this stinging pain

Feels like everything was taken

How many times do I have to be broken

 

You're aware of me being shattered

But seems you are not bothered

I have waited and became wasted

Our precious love story have ended

 

What hurts the most is that

You didn't even try to keep me

But I just love the way you bring out

The best and worst of me

 

You have no idea what I've been through

Just to move on and get over you

It's easy to pretend that I do not care about you

But the truth is I'm still in love with you

Author's Note

My friends told me that this is just so long that it looks like two poems joined together. :D I'm sorry if it seems super long. :D

Reviews

[SuicidePact.]

It's long but I liked it :D

[s.r.knight]

I liked this one but not as much as your other ones. This one seemed more complicated than the others. Your shorter ones seem more to the point. I still liked this one but maybe just add in some different details if your making a longer poem. Very good though, keep up the good writing! :)

[reflectingus]

Aww, this is both sweet and sad. Love is known to both please and annoy, and well, that's how it is. And no, the length is fine, but the only thing I feel is well, I guess the poem felt like you were simply repeating the same lines throughout, there didn't seem to be much difference in the idea, so I guess that's what made it seem a bit too long. Maybe you can make it a bit more interesting by adding some more details, I mean you have picked a great topic, there's so much you can add to this! Also "The only thing I ever wanted to be with is YOU" - in this line on the 3rd stanza, I think instead of 'only thing' it should be 'only one', that sounds better and makes more sense. Anyway, great job, keep writing! :)