A New Beginning

A New Beginning

A Poem by Geraldine

I admit I am not yet totally
moved on with my past
I know I am still isolated
and I think it will lasts

I want to continue my life
I want to get over him
But how can I do that
If I can't get rid of him

I want to start all over again
Without him in my life
I know the consequence
And that's not to laugh

I am really hurt of what he did
It tears me apart and left broken
I want to take revenge on him
To tell him the words left unspoken

I am still now on the 
Process of forgetting
And I hope I can start
A new beginning

© 2012 Geraldine


Author's Note

Geraldine
I have written this years ago inspired by a friend. ^^ I just saw how hurt she was of her break up that made me wrote this. ^^

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Nice inspiration from your author's note, and nice write. A real happening within life, hurt, love... nice emotion in this. You touched onto the feelings nicely.

Posted 11 Years Ago


very nice poem but i think in the fourth line it is better if last instead of lasts, i know it is a typing mistake

Posted 12 Years Ago


Heart break hurts more then any broken bone can :( This showed all that emotion good job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


I enjoy the anger that builds up near the end. I can really feel your emotion. Well done!

Posted 12 Years Ago


aaww

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on March 19, 2012
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