Impossible Dream

This is about a girl who is secretly in love with the man of her dreams..

I saw your pretty face
Under the tree shed
Holding a thick book
Seriously reading it

But you are with her
Her head sleeping in
Your broad shoulder
Holding your hand

You look such a sweet
And perfect couple
I walk away and left
To stop the sight of you

I saw your pretty face
In my favorite bookstore
I smell that enticingly
Masculine scent of yours

When you got closer
I saw your gorgeous eyes
Filled with happiness
And your apple red lips

I smiled faintly 'cause
I know I can only love you
Secretly and can
Silently dream of you

Author's Note

Your comments, suggestions and criticisms are very much appreciated here for improving myself. Sorry for the grammar mistakes, and thank you for reading."

`swiszy

Reviews

[Cathy Wattam]

A nice, albeit sad poem, written well. I really like the title too.

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the story and the way you ended the poem. Told a sad tale with a ending of understanding. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Divinity Sleeps in This]

This is such a good 'crush' or infatuation, I know that feeling all too well. Great topic. I found it feminine and yearning.

[Distant horizons]

Nicely done.

[reflectingus]

I can really relate to this, and that's why I was reading this piece so intently. The poem has been written beautifully, so true to unrequited love, and I love it. There are some small grammar mistakes, but overall, amazing job :)

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

I like this, the title is fitting to the romantic dream you picture in this poem. Nice write.