A Brave New World

A Brave New World

A Poem by BlueRibbon

With our new world connected,
We show fear of connection.
With our new world overhauled in commotion,
We reveal our true intention.
Awakened in a mental state,
Is the gold painted metal slate,
That drives the heartbeat of a dying life.
A personal strife for a better life,
A mystical being is what we all wish to.
Many of us still stuck in one trivial personal issue.
I'd be lying if I said mine wasn't missing you.  
We all now feel some strange entitlement,
That our "rights" allow us to do whatever we want to.
Lessons learned to take advantage of immunity,
A fossilized ideology of community.
  A dream for society to understand empathy,
For now we have no sympathy.
What a wonder for us to be,
We're a self condemning bunch of selves,
Aren't we?

© 2015 BlueRibbon


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Added on May 14, 2015
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BlueRibbon
BlueRibbon

New York, NY



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Suave and compromising. Careful, cautious and organized. Likes to point out people's mistakes. Likes to criticize. Stubborn. Quiet but able to talk well. Calm and cool. Kind and sympathetic. Concerned.. more..

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A Poem by BlueRibbon