Missing

Missing

A Poem by BlueRibbon
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You are a feeling.
Tangible. Discord.
Broken grammar and misconstrued constructions to a misread map of who you became.
Desperate, scrambling for an identity.
Falling to the floor no longer proves you have ground to stand on, and the porcelain still shines.

© 2015 BlueRibbon


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Great piece! I like how you can describe so much but so simply.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very good. Powerful delivery.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

BlueRibbon

9 Years Ago

Thank you! I hope that you share this and other works of mine, I think I really have something here... read more
Matching Socks

9 Years Ago

You're welcome. :)
And ditto...

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Added on January 31, 2015
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BlueRibbon
BlueRibbon

New York, NY



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