Tanka on Sunset!

The muted sun shed out
subtle light as lantern,
dissolved into the sea in stages,
leaving apricot blush
cloak to the clouds!

Author's Note

First try on tanka, welcome to suggestions and feedback!

Reviews

[Shy Joe]

From a lanterns light, to a clouds cloaked view. Your poem is as enjoyable as the fruit you gave birth to. I could watch that sun bow out any day.

I thought the use of "apricot blush" was unique and creative. Really enjoyable.

Thank you for sharing.

[SwethaM]

Thank you much for your gracious words!

[Coyote Poetry]

Wonderful use of words. You gave enough to create meaning and thoughts for the reader. Thank you Swetha for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[SwethaM]

Thank you so much !

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Swetha.