Scars

Scars

A Poem by Lily

As I walk in the dark,

I notice a new mark.

The scar in my heart,

Has yet another part.

I listen to the familiar pour,

Of rain in my heart.

Sadening as it gets hit by a dart.

Love will never fade,

Once the vow is made.

"I love you"

Will have to do.

Never let go,

Of that bow,

That pierced my heart,

And made the last part.

There will always be that scar,

No matter how far,

Life may go,

Never let go.

© 2008 Lily


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A nice one. Good job. Keep writing.

Posted 16 Years Ago


The rhyme was forced, it appeared. However, it wasn't bad. I can see the emotion and the thought.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on August 19, 2008

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Lily
Lily

Sunnyday, FL



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