Titanic

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Titanic

Excitement spread quickly,
Through the dock that fine day,
As Titanic docked in,
Overlooking the crowd…

No one could’ve foreseen,
The events that wold be,
As she flew from harbour,
Overlooking the sea…

The sun it slowly sank,
Beyond the horizon,
Likewise did the famed ship,
Overlooking the ice…

The ship’s bow took the strain,
Of the colliding ice,
Shrieks rang down below,
Overlooking the fright...

Above and below sea,
Panic did ride the waves,
As Titanic sank down,
Overlooking the screams...

The Titanic snapped,
From the iceberg’s crash,
As water flooded in,
Overlooking the ship...

Dot, Dash, Dot; Dot, Dash, Dot;
Save our souls, Save our souls,
Pleaded the control man,
Overlooking his death...

But too little too late,
Families torn apart,
Lifeboats splashed underneath,
Overlooking the waves...

The unsinkable sank,
With innocent lives,
As Carpathia came,
Overlooking the crowd...

Author's Note

I wrote this for my English essay and I'm sort of proud of it. Please tell me what you think of it!!!!

Reviews

[Invisible]

always a compelling story, an event none shall ever forget. me and courtney also wrote poems on the subject, as i'm sure have others, it seems to touch us all that sinking ship.

[Acer]

Nicely written, i think you've covered the titanic book in your word's. If that's for your essay writing then i'd say that you'll b come first among the class students. I really loved it.Yet i've nothing to say, you've zipped my tongue indeed. You've a great talent...by your writing i saw...

[Alys Jackson]

Awwwww thnx Acer. That means so much to me. Thank you!

[Acer]

My pleasure, i said what i saw by your writing, really it was good...not good i think your overall rating was excellent. I wish that i could see/read more about it from you.
My pleasure again.