Flowers

Petals kissed with dew
Glistening in the sun
Making the morning look jeweled
Buds opening in the sun
Painting the ground with color
Making the air fragrant and new

Reviews

[Edward Clay]

fresh - i can smell the petals, and feel the air. from line 1 to the end, this feels bright, springing with a step, a sustained ambience - this gave nature a palet, and it wrapped itself with your words. fascinating, and beautiful.