Cubicle
A Poem by
Sweedy Pie
Trapped in a cubicle of confusion
Tired of living up-to everyone's expectations
Unable to vent out my frustration
I sit here; lamenting my limitations
I stare at the blank space
Hurt in many different ways
Tears sprinkle down my face
I sit here ; counting my remaining days
Days that will relieve me
From this profound insanity
Delusions have deceived me
I sit here; seeking peace from reality
© 2017 Sweedy Pie
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I'm sure there are many in your position that would love to head for the nearest plane to somewhere quiet and not so hectic.
The pressure of an office job can spin your head in different directions at once.
You've expressed your frustrations well here.
Posted 7 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
7 Years Ago
Thank you for understanding the hidden frustration behind this simple poem. Means a lot !!!!!
Reviews
I'm sure there are many in your position that would love to head for the nearest plane to somewhere quiet and not so hectic.
The pressure of an office job can spin your head in different directions at once.
You've expressed your frustrations well here.
Posted 7 Years Ago
I'm sure there are many in your position that would love to head for the nearest plane to somewhere quiet and not so hectic.
The pressure of an office job can spin your head in different directions at once.
You've expressed your frustrations well here.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
7 Years Ago
Thank you for understanding the hidden frustration behind this simple poem. Means a lot !!!!!
I love it. It's full of emotions, the reader can relate and feel "you" in it. Nice work!
Posted 7 Years Ago
I love it. It's full of emotions, the reader can relate and feel "you" in it. Nice work!
7 Years Ago
aww thank you so much glorea!!! means a lot
Great work. I think we've all had those feelings. Very relatable. You may want to try using a caesura instead of the semi colon endings each stanza. Just a suggestion though. :)
Posted 7 Years Ago
Great work. I think we've all had those feelings. Very relatable. You may want to try using a caesura instead of the semi colon endings each stanza. Just a suggestion though. :)
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
7 Years Ago
Yes that is a good suggestion tim. thank you!
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Added on March 29, 2017
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