That One Song

That One Song

A Poem by SweeTLoU

you left me here all alone to die
on the floor cause im flyin high
i said id stop but why even try? 
you'll just do this again
its not the first time we've been here before
building walls and locking doors
i cant take this bitter cold anymore
make this torment end

just like that one song stuck in my head
i just cant seem to forget
the last three words to me you said 
made you more dead to me than juliette 

if i sent this whole place up in flames
would you care at all would anything change?
my pride wont let me play this game
so walk away and forget my name
cause im sure you have better things to do
than torture me while you're passing through
like a nomad in and out of my life
you just cut me and twist the knife

just like that one song stuck in my head
i just cant seem to forget
the last three words to me you said 
made you more dead to me than juliette 

© 2016 SweeTLoU


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great words and steady flow.
"just like that one song stuck in my head
i just cant seem to forget
the last three words to me you said
made you more dead to me than juliette"
solid ending to an awesome piece.
Thanks for the read.
~Death

Posted 8 Years Ago



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I love music i love playing guitar, jammin tunes anything from metal to country, most of the stuff i write is addiction or recovery based. if it helps anyone else thats great but i just write to clear.. more..

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