Demonized

Searching for a part of me, Wondering where it could be, But now I see what I can't do Is take back what I gave to you

Goodbye good riddance I'm glad it's gone, that part of me you strung along.
Blinded my evil filled with hate, a perfect fire fueled by pain
I gave you everything but my name and now I'll never be the same
That's ok I needed change
looking back it seems so strange to think I was ever on your hook, a single taste was all it took

So now I see you Look at me Tell me what it is you see
Have I changed?
Am I the same?
Do you even know my name?

Whether you do or not it's okay Anonymity is the price I pay and I know you'll never go away so behind my eyes is where you'll stay

I'd rather lock you up in my brain than have you swimming through my veins....

Reviews

[Sheila Kline]

Your thoughts and meaning are clear in what reads to me somewhat as lyrics. It would be easier to read however if it had punctuation such as in the line of "Goodbye good riddance I'm glad........did you mean for these to be stand alone lines? That would make it easier to follow for this reader, and would actually emphasize the point you are making.