Dreams

The first time I've actually wrote in song form with guitar to go with it... rather than just poetry

Doesn't mAtter what I say
Doesn't matter what I do
Your already going away
And nothing is stopping you

You bring me here to paradise
Made me feel like I could fly
Then in the blink of an eye
You rip me right out of the sky

Was it ever real at all
Did you build me up to watch me fall
Tell me it's just a bad dream
That this isnt my reality

Doesn't matter whose at fault
Doesn't matter whose to blame
If you don't tear down your wall
Then nothing is gonna change

I gave you space so you could breathe
Now breath your life into me
I don't wanna live alone
Angel just fly back home

Was it ever real at all
Did you build me up to watch me fall
Tell it's just a bad dream
That this isnt my reality

Angel just fly back to me
Wake me up from this dream
I can't take this nightmare anymore.......

Reviews

[Lizardo]

Wow this is very deep, something that builds you up for good but then strikes you in the back? Ouch
I know that feeling.
The concept that you put in the poem is really good and the poem itself is enjoyable to read
Awesome work!

[SweeTLoU]

Thanks man it's the first complete song I've ever wrote

[SweeTLoU]

With music I mean

[Lizardo]

Wow, that's really good

[SweeTLoU]

Appreciate it brother

[Lizardo]

Any time Man :)