Given Up

Given Up

A Poem by SweeTLoU

Ive given up
I'm falling apart
pumping poison in my veins
to fill my black heart

I don't really know
what led me astray
or why i let myself
get this way
covered in sweat
sick with regret
falling so fast
I cut my safety net
so tonight just might
be my last sunset

Ive given up
just let me hide
I'm killing myself
with passive suicide

Walking around
one foot in the grave
lost and lonely
sick and depraved
id ask you to save me
but whats left to save?

Ive given up
I'm falling apart
collapsing like a vein
underneath the track marks

One more fix i swear I'm done
here it comes, the next last one
if I fall out don't wake me up
I'm done with this Ive given up

No more lies
Ive given up
i swear i tried
Ive given up
please don't cry
Ive given up
I finally died
Ive given up



© 2014 SweeTLoU


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Touched!! Fine Writing & Well Expressed

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on November 12, 2014
Last Updated on November 12, 2014
Tags: addiction, overdose, death, struggle, pain

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SweeTLoU
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I love music i love playing guitar, jammin tunes anything from metal to country, most of the stuff i write is addiction or recovery based. if it helps anyone else thats great but i just write to clear.. more..

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