Life Dissolving into Nothing

The people i once knew, now start to disappear
Are we scared? Are our actions clouded by fear?
I also find it hard to cope, I dont know what to do
I want to stay myself, but the pressures breaking me in two

Judging every person, now every single living thing
Living life like a puppet, on its masters string
Ive been tryna break lose, but i think its just too late
Want to make my own destiny - not leave it to fate!

No more love in the world, 'cause everyones got cautious
No sincerity left, and its making me nauseous!
This world on the final stage of losing all its trust
And everyones living on the power of greed and lust

All genuine emotions, start departing from our hearts
I guarantee this insecurity will finally break us apart
In a decade this world's not the same anymore
I just wish it cud go back, to they way it was before

There so much hate, and just so little love
As if Gods left us, from up above...
All our emotions, turn to selfish greed and hate
Am i the ONLY ONE trying to deny our fate??

This distrust and deceitfulness thats now spread around
Is going to slowly, bring this world crashing down
And the world that will rise, will give no one a chance!
Relationships will reverse, and nothing will advance

Do yourself a favor and try not be just like the rest
We're all desperate now, but still try to be your best
Be one of the few, who fight and slow the pace
Find one of the good lovers out there, 'cause now its a race...

Reviews

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I read them all. This is one of my favorites. I like the progression and the rhyme. I love how all your poems contain such emotion. They don't give excuses or room for misinterpretation, it's just raw feeling. Good job, I look forward to reading more