paired . . .

As I was telling you
about the mirror
that reflects a mirror,
a star appeared
reflecting the smile
that filled your lips.
Then you gave me the job
of counting
all the stars that appear
reflecting the first star.
I have seen
no dawn
after that.

,..

Reviews

[Sindu]

That's very expressive! So delicately put.. Nice :)

[Frozen Eyes]

Counting 1, 2. 3, 4......... what was I counting?? oops ur words distracted me :)

[Namrata]

If you don't mind me extending,
Lost my count of the single big picture
Million merry stars now draw me nearer
To your mellifluous aura
I found your countless virtues even in dark.

[Swaroop Manikandan]

that's beautiful... :-)

[Namrata]

pleasure !

[stars are far]

aww thats so cute.. well done :)

[Swaroop Manikandan]

Thanks you friend...

[stars are far]

always my pleausre

[Mayank]

Superb! ever sacrificing emotion of love.

[Swaroop Manikandan]

Thank you Mayank for the read...

[Matching Socks]

Sweet and maybe romantic, but subtle.
Nicely done.

[Swaroop Manikandan]

Thank you friend....