nesting sky . . .

You are the only one
who could recognise
those numerous lights
in my darker sky.

Still, I am trying in a hurry
to conceal the sky
in an abandoned nest. 

Now, please don't send me
your birds
that lay star eggs.  

,..

Reviews

[Frozen Eyes]

Trying to hide the shine, yet revealing a lot. love it

[Swaroop Manikandan]

great that you love it... keep coming...

[Eve Ola]

dark sky and birds with star egg, best pickup words I enjoyed the way you relate.

[Swaroop Manikandan]

Thanks Eve...

[Mazie]

this is a ice piece, I had different images come to mind when reading this; first looking up at a bleak, dark sky ad then being joined by another who points out the light. It feels like someone who is experiencing a low moment in their life, when someone comes along to try and help brighten their spirits. I don't know if that's what you had intended, but it's what came to mind, very beautiful

[Swaroop Manikandan]

Thank you pal for stopping by and adding your meaning to those words...

[Namrata]

This is so beautiful......one of the rare times I read over and again... Until it imbues deep.

[Swaroop Manikandan]

Thank you Namrata... Great that you enjoyed it...

[Mayank]

The brevity of this poem is amazing... touche!