Fill in the blank . . .

Silenced by
that morning's pink sun,
her mother was
sitting calm
when I visited them
last evening.

I saw the girl
looking at the sky
and counting.

'Are you counting
how many stars are there?',
I asked her.

'No',
she smiled.

'Then?'

'I am counting
how many are yet to come?'

,..

Reviews

[Stonz P.]

BRAVO!
This is what poetry is all about! The imagery, the flow, the structure, all is great.. good to have visited your profile.

[Swaroop Manikandan]

Thank you Stonz for the review and the visit... Great to have you here...

[Eve Ola]

wow I always love your questioning style and the way she replied.she is amazing

[Frozen Eyes]

Inspiration at its best form... hope a lot many are yet to come !!

[Swaroop Manikandan]

:-) I love the girl...