You are not therefore I am not...

We as we are
never suit to each other
I projected an I
that you did like
You projected a you
that I did like
And finally on our coming together
our lips stayed away from each other
without sharing the beauty of that moment...

,..

Reviews

[Frozen Eyes]

unfinished "kiss" unsaid "words unmatched shiver through the spine.. thrilled :)

[Wynter Page]

reminds me to always be who I am, so someone will fall in love with me!
very poignant and yet deep.

[Swaroop Manikandan]

of course yes... await the fall... and then the spring...

[Sophy Freebirds]

Ouch.. its too saecastic. We liked each other but the chemistry of the reaction i+ u= 0... I liked the way in which you depicted I was attracted to YOU.. and vice versa.. a new concept of writing.well done ;)

~Sophy

[Swaroop Manikandan]

thanks sophy... my words are always caught in between I and YOU...

[Namrata]

A very practical note, this time, eh ? Nevertheless you should keep telling stories.