naturally...

I keep a pile of words

on your sleeping eyes,

which then start playing

with your rhythmic breathe.

When you wake up,

trap them with your smile

and put them on your

yet-to-finish breakfast table.

Let the morning sun

savour some meanings.

,..

Reviews

[Frozen Eyes]

"yet-to-finish breakfast" love the use of it.. and trapped your words with my smile.. :)

[Sugandha]

it's the cutest little piece of work I've read.. so dreamy.. Keep it up!

[Namrata]

A beautiful thought as fresh as a morning breeze.

[Eve Ola]

I found it nice specially the way you say " rhythmic breathe." i enjoyed

[Sophy Freebirds]

Yes naturally our mind works.. when we pile our thoughts in the table of words... i liked the metaphor.. you tried something different other than the conversation stuff.And i must say it is brilliant. :) keep writing

~Sophy