moon-tree . . .

clear sky of 
the rain-stopped-night.
the tree in front 
hides the moon 
that has just come out 
of the clouds.

looking at the moon
through the leaves
you are asking,
'is the moon grown
in the tree?'.

as i smile at you in silence
you take my hand in yours 
to say
'no, the tree has grown in the moon'.

you too start smiling 
with that revelation
as my space gets
filled with 
the moon-tree.

,..

Reviews

[Eve Ola]

this one is beautifulllll. I love the part "
looking at the moon
through the leaves
you are asking,
'is the moon grown
in the tree?'.

very nice Swaroop :)

[Swaroop Manikandan]

thanks dear Eve...

[Eve Ola]

ur welcome

[audrie]

Such a beautiful image - the tree growing into the moon - loved it!

[Wynter Page]

This poem makes me smile, I just love that word "moon-tree"
There is beautiful imagery and description here, even though it's simple.
Another wonderful write :)

[Matching Socks]

A beautiful write my friend.

[Gurleen Saluja]

Beautifully and placidly worded :)

[priya]

Lovely and romantic. :) reader's delight.

[Namrata]

Beautiful. Pleasurable read.