a prologue . . .

Amidst all the gasping gaps

and escaping sighs,

we reached the peak

where only one could stay.

I then swayed my white flag

and offered to jump off the peak.

You but had a spacious smile

and accommodated me inside the

milky white sheet,

which made us one.

‘I feel that we should be stopping this game

at any point from now’, you said.

‘mm..?’, I queried.

‘Just that every act of your entering in

throws me off my own self’,

you said

with eyes wide open.

,..

Reviews

[Frozen Eyes]

aah the white sheet again.. intrigues me every time u wrap it around.. well expressed :)

[Namrata]

I must say you pen down your poems in such a creative way. You really met a person like this whom you converse with in your poems? It drives my curiosity.

[Swaroop Manikandan]

Yes Namrata, the lines are from the real experience...

[Namrata]

Whoa ! found one lucky being on earth .

[Swaroop Manikandan]

Wish you to be lucky as well :-)

[Ayushi]

Very interesting and pleasing write..
Loved the way you portrayed the emotions :)

[Swaroop Manikandan]

Thanks for that Ayushi... It is such a great emotion indeed...

[Gurleen Saluja]

Nicely penned.. A lovely write.. :)

[Swaroop Manikandan]

Thanks you Gurleen for the review...

[Gurleen Saluja]

You're welcome :)

[Brianna Brie]

Interesting poem. It speaks of the unsure moments in love or perhaps lust not sure which one. I enjoyed the poetic climb with you. :)

[Swaroop Manikandan]

Thanks Brianna that you enjoyed the climb... :-)