yet another game...

We sat then to play the game of dice.
You kept some of your sights as coins,
forcing me to keep my sighs in response.
As the dice rolled, the evening too entered into a gambling night.
Your sights moved forward,
I saw my sighs moving backwards
and reaching the state of breathless.
By the time you reached the centre,
I was thrown beyond the peripheries.
You just closed your eyes as you ended the game,
which somehow left me with another magical dice.
I wish I could start the whole game once again,
not from the beginning but from the end.
See, the first rays of dawn are colouring your face.

,..

Reviews

[Frozen Eyes]

A very remarkable realization.. start from the end.. WOW! Loved it :)

[Girl With A Pen]

"I wish I could start the whole game once again,
not from the beginning but from the end."

My favorite poem by far!

[priya]

Lovely lines:
I wish I could start the whole game once again,
not from the beginning but from the end.

This reminds me how much we try to change things which are not in our control,we get agitated by the fact that some things cant happen the way we want.
beautiful poem.loved it. :)

[Swaroop Manikandan]

Thank you Priya that you liked it...

[Matching Socks]

That was really lovely. :)
Nicely penned.

[Swaroop Manikandan]

It was a great feel to be in too... Thanks Ance...